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    dots Submission Name: 30/Omdots
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    Author: rememberplaydoh
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 78/102/60
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       A reflection from/on/about the space where I find my peace - outside, beside the train tracks. A meditation.


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    dots30/Omdots
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    (written 03/28/19)

    The buzzing of the lines...
    The hum of distant traffic...
    Sun Rises
    birdsong
    A train crawls past...
    A plane flies overhead...
    Sun Sets
    wind blows
    Clouds float pink and orange...
    Three stars shine against the blue...
    Moon Rises
    The buzzing of the lines...




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