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Reflected Selves


Author: rememberplaydoh
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Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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Just think about the physics for a minute...


Reflected Selves



(written 5 Feb '19)

Come sit with me
in front of the mirror
- let our reflections meet -
there is a closeness
and a distance
- as the light bounces between us -
and I see you...
...the way you see yourself.




Submitted on 2019-04-25 14:22:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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