Reflected Selves

Author: rememberplaydoh Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 78 /103 /60 Words: 44

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Reflected Selves

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(written 5 Feb '19) Come sit with me in front of the mirror - let our reflections meet - there is a closeness and a distance - as the light bounces between us - and I see you... ...the way you see yourself.

Submitted on 2019-04-25 14:22:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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