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    dots Submission Name: Elemental Lovedots
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    Author: rememberplaydoh
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 78/102/60
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsElemental Lovedots
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    (written 4-27-19)

    Come be warmed by my fire,
    Rest your body in my beds,
    Let my waters wash o'er you,
    Hear my breeze whisper your name.

    Feel my heat inside your soul,
    my rosebud kisses on your face.
    Cool your senses in my pool,
    sigh your cares into my wind.

    Let my power be your strength,
    entwined forever in my limbs,
    Ride my waves and taste my spring.
    Our hurricane begins.




    Submitted on 2019-04-27 19:06:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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