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    dots Submission Name: Spit the World into a Gin Glassdots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75/194/254
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSpit the World into a Gin Glassdots

    I speak to the right few
    in places dim lights knew
    new possibility, not confuse
    how few think
    little of me and you
    truth is the truth – a bond; a glue
    of cheap gin masked with vermouth

    I just take a drink
    lay back
    let the beat show you
    a song played to over exposure
    easy road
    rode to closure

    words kissed thigh and neck
    fantasy fished in cyber gill nets
    swipe me right, show me what’s next
    Tinder Tanqueray bets abuse
    used to fulfill a sense of you
    new shoes and rouge

    I never made you scream
    all I came for was me –
    sorry I couldn’t be
    more than you came for
    or whatever clever shit I think
    oh who cares
    I just take a drink
    and you’re just an olive on a toothpick
    into the trash I flick.

    Submitted on 2019-04-28 16:30:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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