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    dots Submission Name: The Charlatan Treedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Charlatan Treedots
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    Grown tired of minced words,
    no nourishment in them.
    Skeletal fish head reminder
    in uselessness and obstinance,
    nothing of substance
    absence of essence
    in all except mental senescence.
    Yet there is hope in our rope,
    that liars will be strung –
    effigy of who they were
    totem of what others had incurred.

    Feed these worms –
    they rise within the rain,
    writhing within the pain
    of the last words spoke
    choking final moments
    all in vain
    believing which comes from the sky
    delivers or saves.

    Faith lied –

    It was just a cardinal,
    feeding on the lowly
    beneath the charlatan tree.




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