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    dots Submission Name: Happy Birthdaydots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 75/191/252
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 363
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    dotsHappy Birthdaydots
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    Where I choose to be,
    sit softly
    to agree to disagree, in feints
    so abruptly
    false in dichotomy,
    to describe me
    as happy.

    Leaden leaves decaying
    like light against
    October darkness.
    Colors of Summer
    remember one another
    hand in hand –
    claw and claw –
    crabs which pull the bright
    down into an undeserving end,
    black as night.

    Mature and selfish,
    are my thoughts
    as I sip bourbon I cannot afford
    with no one but myself,
    satisfaction adored by few who know me
    the façade where I'll speak
    true words,
    with a liars tongue.

    Yes, indeed
    happy damn birthday to me.




    Submitted on 2019-04-28 16:33:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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