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    dots Submission Name: The Searchersdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Searchersdots
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    I begin,
    here –
    as I lie awake in bed,
    although – topic aside,
    off subject in head
    I return to the Westerns of old
    in youth,
    to ponder instead –
    of who was better
    Wayne, Eastwood or Newman.
    Men who depict
    character, shades and hue, and
    what could become of man
    if we keep our feet –
    stand and fight until the end.

    I continue,
    there –
    as I lie awake, again
    enamored by the strong feminine
    which I cannot recall a single face.

    What does that say of me?
    Devoid of depth and character –
    refine a sense of distillation
    from me, my words and reflect
    a man focused on more
    beyond borders of sense
    yet delve into intellect.

    One placed between
    gluttony and greed –
    kidnapped by Comanche
    my selfish need
    ego laced with one thought –
    me.

    I finish,
    where –
    as I lie to myself, again
    enslaved to procrastination's
    solemn lack of ambition.
    I can hear Ethan Edwards anguish
    “don’t ever ask me more"
    as I lie awake, yearning –
    yearning for someone to implore
    ask of possibility
    demand faith be restored
    in the brave and bold.

    The Searchers,
    define –
    as I grow weary, on this, the third night.
    There is more monster inside
    cold steel, scalp in hand –
    a decade gone
    marred from misanthropy
    fighting to be better at the end.

    My thoughts walk off,
    I dream –
    am I shadow or man?




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