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    dots Submission Name: To the Poetsdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 209
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsTo the Poetsdots
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    What are we,
    if not amazing words
    to unspoken stories?
    Esoteric combination
    of human ideation
    gave us imagination to inspire
    inspiration,
    aspire to acquiesce
    divination
    and further this –
    the complex,
    uniqueness of our pen.

    To the poets,
    contemporaries
    which write nothing of substance
    or echo what wasn't –
    you, the decay
    of thoughts on page,
    spec of Faraday
    constant spark
    which unknowingly feeds
    the rage,
    of those of
    you who are great.

    Why do we choose
    to revel in
    nonsense, an
    arguably pointless flight of fancy?
    Predilections for
    Nancy Willard's childish prose,
    neglectful of Bukowski's
    stoicism and hard road –
    gave to us
    abdication of modern
    sensibilities.

    To the poets,
    who yield to perceived truths –
    Emily Dickinson,
    is not in you –
    The trembling hand of Poe,
    will not guide you –
    Strike your name into stone,
    weather the sea
    of time – survive
    and write something
    worth being alive.




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