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    dots Submission Name: Saviors and Stormsdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSaviors and Stormsdots
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    Do you remember, Judas
    chose silver over Beyond
    to show us what becomes
    of human trepidation
    and when love
    fails to over come –
    he hung for what he had done.

    After all,
    we are more than what fables
    decry,
    a destiny our hand will aquiver
    unsure of what to write –

    Eyes upturned to a painted sky
    face a western wind
    close in hand –
    warmth of hope, thoughts begin to rise
    sowing possibilities
    happiness,
    bread of life –

    We share these moments
    with those we admire and abhor –
    we return to these shores
    where the soul is out at sea
    lost in storm
    we dream of the calm.

    After all,
    we search for saviors
    in ghosts –




    Submitted on 2019-04-28 16:37:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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