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    dots Submission Name: Mute and Misanthropydots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsMute and Misanthropydots
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    Her shroud hangs over,
    looming, dark and verdant canopy
    shielding wet, weepy – sleeping eyes
    unknowingly
    there is a silence in divine
    her whispers persist
    in characterless
    words – wounds that satellite
    thoughts which escape
    unknowingly –
    draped in sadness.

    A corner in the attic,
    a crack in the gutter,
    a pile of rubble –
    the depths of her shadow
    beseech,
    made of loneliness.

    She holds a lantern without a light,
    unknowingly –
    depriving those of
    criminality, kinship and truth;
    glory, passion and royalty
    as all are equal
    beneath the earth
    unknowingly –
    buried in meaninglessness idolatry.

    A smoldering fire in a furnace,
    a shallow ditch a village away,
    a poster still searching –
    the depths of her hatred,
    claim,
    names and keepsakes –
    mementos and stories –
    history and family –
    possibility and everything
    that was consumed by
    misanthropy.




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