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Sledge


Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75 /194 /254
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Sledge


Composition is key –
an array
of little lines
filled
with
single
words –
does nothing, but
affirm the useless,
insignificant, thoughts
fooled into thinking
they were
clever.




Submitted on 2019-04-29 20:24:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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