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    Author: MEGASWELL
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 31/26/30
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Dream me a new language.

    Worthy, suspended, sublime.

    Utter words unable to fail

    what they define.


    Whisperwrite it on my skin.

    Bathe me in understanding.


    Having done all this;

    Open fists. Outstretch arms.

    Give me to the wind.


    I will have become a thing

    you can no longer hold.





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