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Submission Name: Entrapment dots

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Author:	rememberplaydoh
Elite Ratio:	4.21 - 78/102/60
Words:	69

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	183
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Entrapment dots

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(written 4/28/19)

Honey lips drip
kisses and sweet nothings -
lies covered in chocolate.
Your curséd perfume
enchants your victim,
lured into lurid traps.
Locked between your legs -
vice of love,
tool of scorn -
beauty and betrayal
embodied in one flesh.
Moist sap pours
from wetted cunt
Your victory
a death.
Heaving in a pool
your victim lies
awaiting an end
that only you can bring.

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