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    Author: rememberplaydoh
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 78/102/60
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    (written 4/28/19)

    Honey lips drip
    kisses and sweet nothings -
    lies covered in chocolate.
    Your curs├ęd perfume
    enchants your victim,
    lured into lurid traps.
    Locked between your legs -
    vice of love,
    tool of scorn -
    beauty and betrayal
    embodied in one flesh.
    Moist sap pours
    from wetted cunt
    Your victory
    a death.
    Heaving in a pool
    your victim lies
    awaiting an end
    that only you can bring.




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