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    Author: MEGASWELL
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 31/26/30
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    you have things to do
    i am the threshold of the day
    we are everything at once

    trade it in for dirt for
    water for fire
    take shape under family
    trees only reach higher

    damned into seizures of
    flesh crawling over diseased
    gardens of bone knawed upon
    by the teeth of jealous gods
    roaming wild imaginations
    fat on the blood of twisted
    history repeating history

    i have things to do
    you are the threshold of the day
    We are everything at once




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