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    dots Submission Name: Sick ondots
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    Author: MEGASWELL
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 31/26/30
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Everyone is a prophet, no one practices.


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    dotsSick ondots
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    honey sweet tricks;
    soft words worn out,
    well here it is
    (since she wondered so loud)
    not where you found it
    or what i thought would be
    never was long enough

    blame the wings
    remember when
    fear was not practiced yet
    until when
    someone said
    there it goes underneath
    everything
    can't be done
    we were taught, we forgot

    so now years pass by
    while we think
    what it meant




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