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    Author: MEGASWELL
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 31/26/30
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       at first i understand...


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    dots~~~dots
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    ~grace~

    intent is for opinion
    to reach ears but weigh
    nothing in her hand.

    knowing letting go will cause
    collisions of possibility to
    become real opportunity.

    that ultimately, if all agree
    on the approach and the solution;
    all but one of us can go home.

    {alignment of purpose leaves
    a purple flowing wake, a galaxy
    'round its head.

    agreement on process sleeps 'til
    three in the afternoon.}




    Submitted on 2019-04-30 23:10:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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