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    dots Submission Name: One Small Stepdots
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    Author: MEGASWELL
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 31/26/30
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Let me be the cosmonaut,

    what licks the membrane of your lobes,
    slightly sweetens your coffee eyes,
    questions superstition, the need for Apollo
    and religious fashion.

    Caress mine cherry flavored, avocado heart
    whilst sucking the marrow from out my hollow bones.
    Clean my music and my violin playing bow tie
    clouds in sailor knots and hang them like thoughts
    from your rafters.

    Lemon yellow orange apple let us fall
    at the feet of the mighty man screaming love
    one another like the slow running waters
    eroding our mother.

    Let me be the cosmonaut.




    Submitted on 2019-05-02 22:03:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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