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Author: OneDarkFlame92
ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Took ten years to figure it out

that when you write, you are a vessel of something else
formatting is the whimsical way the wind blows leaves about
meaning can never be in the words and in your head
at the same time

so why bother. interpret, interpret

you are feeling eternity.
you are writing in real time
the air could change the structure

at any given stanza

you are a vessel.
you have no life, you have no mind
to capture it

if your foot taps to a song your lips would never him
then you are a sucker of the rhythm
and a critic of the melody
but it has you all the same

so let go
of your worldliness
and your learnedness


Submitted on 2019-05-02 22:50:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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