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    Author: OneDarkFlame92
    ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 457/422/225
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Took ten years to figure it out

    that when you write, you are a vessel of something else
    formatting is the whimsical way the wind blows leaves about
    meaning can never be in the words and in your head
    at the same time

    so why bother. interpret, interpret

    you are feeling eternity.
    you are writing in real time
    the air could change the structure

    at any given stanza

    you are a vessel.
    you have no life, you have no mind
    to capture it

    if your foot taps to a song your lips would never him
    then you are a sucker of the rhythm
    and a critic of the melody
    but it has you all the same

    so let go
    of your worldliness
    and your learnedness

    interpret




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