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    dots Submission Name: Taosdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Prose/
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    dotsTaosdots
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    boots over crackling snow
    step with care where it (the snow)
    did not occupy

    Ahead an end, led gracefully to the flat side of the hill
    where it dropped into a ninety degree fall
    mountains dominated in its horizon where snow in the distance fell

    He lifted his chin to the air
    if only to get closer




    Submitted on 2019-05-07 08:14:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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