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    dots Submission Name: a useless assumptiondots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 665/486/414
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsa useless assumptiondots
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    Intentions fall flat
    Like useless messages guarded by larger hands
    You’ve got to go your own way
    Mix your own brand of dynamite

    If you can’t be sure
    Does it even have to be real to begin with?
    You’ve got to come to terms
    And understand that others have their own.

    I’m not trying to mix you into something bigger than I am
    You have just become an ingredient for my mixing hand
    This isn’t to leave a lasting impression it is to strike a key
    To drop a note to give a hint so I might one day just see
    That all this movement isn't something all about only me
    There is a root that’s gaining ground, on its way to being free




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