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For Joanne

Author: rememberplaydoh
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To the beautiful woman whom I have had the honor of calling "Mother." Your soul shines so brightly with love - my wish for you is that you will learn to turn that love inward, just a little more. You deserve it.
Happy Mother's Day

For Joanne

Focus on your strengths
Don't waste time or effort
on things that don't fulfill you.

Keep sight of your goals
Life's journey is for you
and you control this chapter.

Be your own best friend
You deserve the helper
for you are also valued.

Hold on to your dreams
and live your inner joy
You can have that wholeness

And you will.

Submitted on 2019-05-13 11:19:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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