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    dots Submission Name: For Joannedots
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    Author: rememberplaydoh
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 78/102/60
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       To the beautiful woman whom I have had the honor of calling "Mother." Your soul shines so brightly with love - my wish for you is that you will learn to turn that love inward, just a little more. You deserve it.
    Happy Mother's Day


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    dotsFor Joannedots
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    Focus on your strengths
    Don't waste time or effort
    on things that don't fulfill you.

    Keep sight of your goals
    Life's journey is for you
    and you control this chapter.

    Be your own best friend
    You deserve the helper
    for you are also valued.

    Hold on to your dreams
    and live your inner joy
    You can have that wholeness

    And you will.




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