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Author:	rememberplaydoh
Elite Ratio:	4.21 - 78/102/60
Words:	87

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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You...

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Tendril-like you slithered in
Invading.
Fingers drag across hot skin
Pulse quickens
"...arousal..."
(or fear)

A flush
A breath

Tremb'ling my soul screams out
Like a fly in a pitcher plant
my insides thrash
search for escape.
You pause.

Feigning respect
slink to my flank
dripping words of doubt
to take my mind.

Grasping
search for openings
left by soulquakes -
avalanches summoned by my howls

Tremors in the night
aftershocks and waves
Memories claw
raising bumps
crawling across my skin
Again

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.