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Author: rememberplaydoh
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Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Tendril-like you slithered in
Fingers drag across hot skin
Pulse quickens
(or fear)

A flush
A breath

Tremb'ling my soul screams out
Like a fly in a pitcher plant
my insides thrash
search for escape.
You pause.

Feigning respect
slink to my flank
dripping words of doubt
to take my mind.

search for openings
left by soulquakes -
avalanches summoned by my howls

Tremors in the night
aftershocks and waves
Memories claw
raising bumps
crawling across my skin

Submitted on 2019-05-14 10:58:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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