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    dots Submission Name: Terrified part twodots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTerrified part twodots
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    He feels like his heart is hurting
    Something howls in the distance
    It's a far out cry that him thinks there's someone out there that sees him
    Suffering, and terrified, and weak

    There is always another pair of eyes, he knows
    And there is always another suit of tears.




    Submitted on 2019-05-14 22:56:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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