Take No Thought For Tomorrow!

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Take No Thought For Tomorrow!

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It presses in on me, it won't be denied. It lays in wait for me, then whispers in my ear. "It's me, only me, I am no one else". I need you to set me free in ecstasy. I listen, I wonder, is ecstasy so easy. Is this a some kind of a joke? Am I being taken for a fool? "Who are you?", I ask, "State your business". "I am what is, like a butterfly I live for the moment". "What do you want? What do you desire? "I have no desires, I want nothing". Take no thought for tomorrow, and the world is now.

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A great direction to think about, living in the moment. Living in the moment is ecstasy as we should keep no bad memories of the past and no worries about the future. This state of mind makes us enter the state of euphoria.

| Posted on 2019-11-23 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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