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    dots Submission Name: Only One Youdots
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    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 60/63/36
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOnly One Youdots
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    I compare everyone to you.
    Constantly trying replace
    the unreplaceable
    like somehow
    my brain thought
    out of the 7 billion people in this world
    that somehow, somewhere
    theres another just like you.
    That is not the case.
    Believe me
    I've looked far and wide,
    I've searched high and low
    for peices of you,
    for an essence of your presence,
    for a soul to my solitude.
    That I willingly chose
    and convinced myself you are damaged,
    too damaged to fix my broken heart.
    Like the love that we shared was nothing
    but a page in an old book.
    Too tattered and worn down,
    not even fit for donation.
    Oh how hard I've tried to focus
    so intently
    on all the tiny cracks that caved us in.
    Little did I know
    I could never repair
    the most important crack
    forever damaging my heart..
    your smile.




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