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    dots Submission Name: Wooden Teethdots

    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWooden Teethdots

    If teeth could turn brown from lies
    Clacking wood would be heard in echoing eyes
    One closet door bulges at the hinges
    With bones knocking from inside
    And standing wide-eyed leaning against it
    Wood grinding inside
    Against wood in your mouth
    I watch in wonder
    If the plunder under the bones
    Behind the bulging hinges
    Has hidden gems and
    Gold in which no one knows
    Or are they scratching to get rid of
    Broken old trinkets
    But there no one speaks just
    clacking wooden teeth
    Probably bleeding gums with holes
    Leaning against a closet wide-eyed
    It's probably just best if
    I walk away
    And leave you alone

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