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    dots Submission Name: Between the wallsdots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBetween the wallsdots
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    Pinching thoughts wedged deep
    between the walls
    Clearing the air
    Perception for sanity
    Rocks on the bottom floor
    Protection
    From a fall
    And from afar
    Haunting the halls
    Echoing whispers from the cracks in the walls
    Hands easily bat away
    Each pleading call
    Back straight
    Poised firm
    Tall




    Submitted on 2019-05-21 08:47:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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