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    dots Submission Name: quantum infinitydots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.96 - 2136/2096/1674
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       a patricia poem


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    dotsquantum infinitydots
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         anatomically i am no more than a set of things, same as anyone
         else, nothing significant.

         i have eyes, yet how it is they gleam as they look at you.
         i have skin - and how it misses the sensitivity of your skin. i have
         the enormous cavity of the chest where it is that it is filled,
         and filled,
         and filled,
         and filled,
         and over-filled, and over-filled, and filled yet some more.
         impossibly.

         

         and always, returning to me, the love disproving the lie.
         simple. more. abundant.

         this should not be possible.













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