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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.96 - 2136/2096/1674
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       a patricia poem


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    dotsRepetition dots
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         if it was that the artist,
         who with an uncanny foreknowledge
         cajoled. conjured, captured
         with his pulse, his beat [his stilted flow]
         my sweet, my stiff [my utter]
         captivation
         ...

         i promised myself, i would only play it a hundred times.
         a hundred

         

         times - i promised myself that.





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