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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.95 - 2138/2099/1688
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 427
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       a trish poem


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    Daniel I love you...i want to be a part of your life. I've
    just tried to figure myself out here recently and what I
    want and I think I did. Please no questions...just love
    me hard and you can ask later okay??? I'll send an
    address

    ... ... ... ... ... ...


    Yeah, I got you covered with the loving you hard Trish,
    I think you are fucking beautiful (magical). Send that
    location





                                  2.


                                            this isn't slickness.

         

                                  more like sickness.






    Submitted on 2019-05-25 07:18:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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