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    dots Submission Name: Things become tangleddots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.96 - 2136/2096/1674
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       a trish poem


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    dotsThings become tangleddots
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         and now my love is just your love.
         my need for you is your need.
         my passion, your passion,
         my sense of displacement finds you struggling and lost.
         you emit
         a pitch that i emit - and we meet.


         

         i am in you





    Submitted on 2019-05-25 18:58:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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