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    dots Submission Name: what a thought could do to youdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.95 - 2136/2098/1674
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       a trish poem


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    dotswhat a thought could do to youdots
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    so this is what i am now
    the perpetual reality of a song set on loop,
    lost in feelings but limited by the absolute [set]. of our experiences.
    memories of laughter.


    oh, i tell you there is not one little thing i will forget...
    memories of a time when you charmed me,
    the dewy off-ice surface of a water bottle wetting your hand... my
    passion memories
    opening your legs
    .










    and licking.







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