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    dots Submission Name: Terrified part threedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Prose/Depressed
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    dotsTerrified part threedots
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    She dismisses me with a "goodnight"
    My heart bleeds at her conviction
    When that woman goes to stand, you do not argue
    She just wants to rattle your bones.




    Submitted on 2019-05-26 22:43:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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