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    dots Submission Name: Bleeding part twodots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsBleeding part twodots
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    There is nothing to reinforce my personal interest
    The strength in my character has deteriorated
    The smile I wear has reborn
    Into a childlike countenance that once did restore
    Something akin to an ascent

    In my memory is cradled the desire to die
    To forget every good time that I wish would come back to me in present crescent
    And every worship to carry on anew.
    A new day, a new star
    A new way to give myself away.




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