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    dots Submission Name: Emotionsdots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    The tears on my face
    Do not reflect the pain inside
    They only hurt my skin and boil my blood in anger
    All of it bubbles inside of my chest
    Choking my throat
    With the threat of a scream
    That never comes out
    And yes I too want for me to smiles
    And no I can't give one true answer
    As to why
    Only that there is so much
    Because of so many things
    And I want you so badly
    For you to just hold me
    But I know I have thorns all over my body
    And no matter how you try to hold me
    It'll only hurt you
    And how can I expect you to
    Hold me
    Like that?
    I just want for you to say that it's okay
    You're going to love me anyways
    And you do
    But I don't
    Love me at all
    Right now
    And I'm sorry
    That's what I am
    Just sorry
    For my existence
    For my brain
    For my heart
    For my tears that appear
    Too often
    I may have these thorns on my body
    But inside lives this softened
    Fragile heart beating wildly
    Anxiety that it'll break apart
    I just need to think it out some more
    Maybe
    Wait until I feel not so crazy
    And eventually I won't care for awhile
    Numbness enveloping my thoughts
    Until I feel excitement
    Turn back into anguish
    This torturous void of just
    Anger and sadness
    Emotions I can never escape.




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