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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    different from when you have lived a length
    and grope back into your past valiantly? desperately? seeing worth in periods you had foolishly undervalued, love commits us
    to a greater, grander awareness.

    as custodians then? keepers?
    if_ by books and books of especial language only you and i could decipher - to be categorized, and classified, stowed in
    the swale of my chest are volumes and volumes
    of romance -incontrovertibly written - a wonder of you
    all across my skin - the thrill of the first time you kissed me -
    really kissed me, here,



    in the spit of my lips





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