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    dots Submission Name: motivations, eclectic.dots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.95 - 2136/2098/1674
    Words: 247
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       another trish poem


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    dotsmotivations, eclectic.dots
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                                                                               1.

                   i don't mind that you should find emotion on my page.
                   i don't mind if you find feelings on the usb of my ride.
                   yeah, this is one of my tracks.


              2.



    solitary animal. certain of its stance.




    3.



    for serious. real, man.


                             4.

                                            witness the buoyancy of energy,
                                            come along with it,
                                            with a hanging fat-beat you could sneak
                                            a skipping rope under.


                   for a double. or a triple.




    5.


    utilize a little projection,
    think your nipple, in my mouth.


                                                 (i'm sure that could happen).







                                                                     6.



                                                                spirit.





    7.


         i thought i would take on the tattoo of a wolverine
         but the work involved in getting there scraped me and      bruised me so accurately, so truly, i took on its colour

         


    8.


    moreover,

    you did this to me.




    i did this to me//you pushed me to this.




    9.

         shadow boxing.





















                                                      thinking about fucking.







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