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    dots Submission Name: Global Death Do Incitedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    dotsGlobal Death Do Incitedots
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    Your pain is not beautiful
    For it is a burden on mankind
    For that, we are burdens on ourselves.




    Submitted on 2019-06-02 00:08:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I think this poem is dressed rather formerly for the occasion,





    fundamentally flawed... we as humans.
    | Posted on 2019-06-04 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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