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Submission Name: Lying Acceptance dots

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Author:	ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:	20, Male
Elite Ratio:	0.49 - 5/120/135
Words:	54

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	291
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Lying Acceptance dots

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Look at me,
A Storm whose lost his Rain.
What’s the point,
Of a scar that caused no pain?

Close your eyes,
Pretend there’s a shooting star.
Let them in,
Don’t ask them who they are.

Lie again,
Keep up the whole facade.
I’ve always known,
I’m so much worse than flawed.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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