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Submission Name:
Lying Acceptance
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Author:
ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:
20, Male
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54
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Poetry/Misc
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Lying Acceptance
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Look at me,
A Storm whose lost his Rain.
What’s the point,
Of a scar that caused no pain?
Close your eyes,
Pretend there’s a shooting star.
Let them in,
Don’t ask them who they are.
Lie again,
Keep up the whole facade.
I’ve always known,
I’m so much worse than flawed.
Submitted on 2019-06-08 01:01:33
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