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Lying Acceptance

Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 54
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Lying Acceptance

Look at me,
A Storm whose lost his Rain.
What’s the point,
Of a scar that caused no pain?

Close your eyes,
Pretend there’s a shooting star.
Let them in,
Don’t ask them who they are.

Lie again,
Keep up the whole facade.
I’ve always known,
I’m so much worse than flawed.

Submitted on 2019-06-08 01:01:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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