Roots by Chelebel

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Author:	Chelebel
Elite Ratio:	2.18 - 53/169/178
Words:	74

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
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Roots

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No root is ever free
It it a predetermined spot
That never knew
the wind would choose
It’s place where it should be.

That seed it has never thought
just a glimpse of
What might be
It flows into the
Wind

turns into A

Sense of

Me.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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