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Roots


Author: Chelebel
Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 53 /169 /180
Words: 74
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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Roots





No root is ever free
It it a predetermined spot
That never knew
the wind would choose
It’s place where it should be.

That seed it has never thought
just a glimpse of
What might be
It flows into the
Wind


turns into A



Sense of





Me.




Submitted on 2019-06-18 01:31:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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