Roots

Author: Chelebel Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 53 /169 /180 Words: 74

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Roots

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No root is ever free It it a predetermined spot That never knew the wind would choose It’s place where it should be. That seed it has never thought just a glimpse of What might be It flows into the Wind turns into A Sense of Me.

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