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    dots Submission Name: Luchinushkadots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Are my thoughts merely there,
    unscripted shadows
    captured in the orange
    yellow stain of fire
    bound by the twine
    of philosophy
    like some cheap rendition
    of Plato’s
    Allegory of the Cave
    or am I wrong?

    Are my thoughts my own;
    my own truth
    I should speak
    that what it is I see
    what it is I believe
    is something
    which defines who I am
    in this societal pyre
    of entropic theatricality.

    Just an actor
    adlibbing meaning to things
    such as
    “are my thoughts my own…”
    chased by
    an abrupt end.

    Should I die then,
    then what then?




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