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Author: HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 75 /194 /254
Words: 101
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Are my thoughts merely there,
unscripted shadows
captured in the orange
yellow stain of fire
bound by the twine
of philosophy
like some cheap rendition
of Plato’s
Allegory of the Cave
or am I wrong?

Are my thoughts my own;
my own truth
I should speak
that what it is I see
what it is I believe
is something
which defines who I am
in this societal pyre
of entropic theatricality.

Just an actor
adlibbing meaning to things
such as
“are my thoughts my own…”
chased by
an abrupt end.

Should I die then,
then what then?

Submitted on 2019-06-18 20:19:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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