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Hurt


Author: rev.jpfadeproof
ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368 /366 /172
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Hurt



I never knew I could hurt this badly
The savagery of love

Of loving you
In the way you sometimes loved me

DiCicco Cosentino






Submitted on 2019-06-23 21:31:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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