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Author: saartha
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Merge


The mountain is hidden
by mountains of clouds

and the seagulls and I
are watching ice
lace up the riverside.

In the half-light
the water alloys,
lines of bronze and steel

and the city lights
stretch out to see themselves
in that burnished mirror.




Submitted on 2019-06-25 12:27:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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