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    dots Submission Name: Mergedots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230/393/145
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMergedots
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    The mountain is hidden
    by mountains of clouds

    and the seagulls and I
    are watching ice
    lace up the riverside.

    In the half-light
    the water alloys,
    lines of bronze and steel

    and the city lights
    stretch out to see themselves
    in that burnished mirror.




    Submitted on 2019-06-25 12:27:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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