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Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230 /393 /145
Words: 71
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Sometimes you wake up a knife
and that's just how the day goes,
sliding sharp into the air

and you're half-feral,
thin veneers of civility

but god, you drag yourself
out of bed anyway

and really
that's all there is to it

the world and I
shouldering through
the door of each other

as though there was
something worth seeing
on the other side.

Submitted on 2019-06-25 12:28:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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