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    dots Submission Name: Roughdots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230/393/145
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsRoughdots
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    Sometimes you wake up a knife
    and that's just how the day goes,
    sliding sharp into the air

    and you're half-feral,
    thin veneers of civility

    but god, you drag yourself
    out of bed anyway

    and really
    that's all there is to it

    the world and I
    shouldering through
    the door of each other

    as though there was
    something worth seeing
    on the other side.




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