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Ardent


Author: saartha
ASL Info:    27/F/US
Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230 /393 /145
Words: 72
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Ardent


I know this isn’t forever.
Painstakingly, Time
peels back all the soft quilts
we make of our lives.

The bed of knives known always
under the layers, but laying down
the prick surprises us
between the shoulder blades.

That final, simple betrayal.

Still, still
let’s finish this square together,
let the light wander the trees
let the fields grow wild
and my heart love—
all its fervent love—




Submitted on 2019-06-25 12:28:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sheer fatalism at its finest. Love is silky blessed perfection. Until it isn’t.
| Posted on 2019-08-29 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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