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    dots Submission Name: Yearndots
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    Author: saartha
    ASL Info:    27/F/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 230/393/145
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYearndots
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    Night settles in like a raven
    returning to its nest

    The house is chilled and I’ve got
    no one to call dear
    not a soul in this world
    I want to call
    me dear

    No more than a hill
    craves to be loved,

    No more than the raven’s open
    maw of stars

    A chill house but
    I can touch gentle
    the inside of my arm
    its gleaming warmth

    The unbearable
    intimacy of self, I’ve never
    once in my life
    been lonesome.




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