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Author: Crestfallenman
ASL Info:    24/M/CA
Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622 /962 /454
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Struggling for almost a decade to find someone to love and someone to love me has been a listless Hell...I've grown tired and lost for hope...I'm tired of not having anyone by my side...


The call of journey,
Throughout the years of this triumphant misery.
Walking alone, rifting through the lost crannies,
I can find the weakness that dwells deep within me.

When the sun goes down,
I remain here solaced within the pains unspoken,
My dreams, for rapids to swallow and drown,
I don't know how to let anyone else in...

Now because of it, I fall into a winter thorn,
Layered with doubt, my disease tumors in turmoils,
The soles of my shoes frayed and torn,
Nonreciprocal love that simmers the hate I boil...

Please save me from the shame I bathe,
I can not seem to live a life without love...
Becoming this invisible wraith,
Hollowing in a life that I just can't take...

Without love,
There is no meaning

Submitted on 2019-06-30 01:21:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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